"Everything That Grownups Know" 3D in-progress critique
Posted: Mon Oct 17, 2011 8:18 pm
EDIT: Five months after starting this thread, the video is done: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Q9Vt11n4dtE" onclick="window.open(this.href);return false;
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Quick background: I'm a singer/songwriter/multi-instrumentalist who is jumping head first into filmmaking/animation/stereoscopy. (I'm making an animated 3D video album -- more info here.)
I received some helpful feedback from the first video I'd posted a little while back. Instead of waiting until the entire second video is done and then soliciting feedback, I thought I could post segments of the video as they are completed, and solicit your feedback on this thread as I go along.
This song is called "Everything That Grownups Know." You can hear the song (with no visuals) here. The main thing I'm looking for critiques on at the moment, though, are the visuals, and here's the first segment that's completed:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jHs7Ju4BBsQ" onclick="window.open(this.href);return false;
Thoughts?
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Quick background: I'm a singer/songwriter/multi-instrumentalist who is jumping head first into filmmaking/animation/stereoscopy. (I'm making an animated 3D video album -- more info here.)
I received some helpful feedback from the first video I'd posted a little while back. Instead of waiting until the entire second video is done and then soliciting feedback, I thought I could post segments of the video as they are completed, and solicit your feedback on this thread as I go along.
This song is called "Everything That Grownups Know." You can hear the song (with no visuals) here. The main thing I'm looking for critiques on at the moment, though, are the visuals, and here's the first segment that's completed:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jHs7Ju4BBsQ" onclick="window.open(this.href);return false;
Thoughts?